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Real Realization

I was in my shell, enjoying warmth and safety
But then... a day came when I had to hatch...
I opened my eyes...
I saw the world with child-like innocence...
I had fun for sometime...
But then I realized...
A mirror is what I need to become
For purity has no worth here...
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  1. P. VenugopalWednesday, 04 November, 2009

    Don't be cynical. It kills the joy of being. Look at things with innocent wonder. That opens the poetry in you. Great write, but change tract. Best wishes.

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  2. CharuThursday, 05 November, 2009

    Thank you so much sir that you took out time to look at my blog and gave me your valuable advice... I'm really overjoyed to have received ur comment... I am no poet, I just write what I feel but I will definately keep in mind to look at things more innocently

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