If I look back, I see you... If I look ahead, I see you... If I close my eyes, I see you... If I dream, I see you... You are all around me... With your words, you touch my heart With your love, you touch my soul Still, my heart aches for your warm touch My whole life revolves around you, My Sun... You are the closest.... Still, you are so far...
Hm... loved this one.
ReplyDeleteMeandering river.... its so interesting, a river just keeps flowing to meet the sea and to loose its own identity..!
one of the qualities of good haiku is it ends with an 'aha' sensation...like a temple bell humming after the last ring. try for that effect.
ReplyDeleteThis is the guidance I have been looking for... I'm trying to do what u r saying... Looking forward for ur reaction on "Full Toss"
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