Good. It is very difficult to explain what good haiku is. It is like a hickup that you get at the most unexpected moment. It is not intended or premeditated and you cannot hold it back either. That is where the Zen element comes in. You don't struggle climbing. You just fall... Keep falling. :-)
On an unknown road, in a moonless night I start for home Not sure of reaching my destination As death haunts the place I shudder with fear of unknown But for the light of love I am engulfed in darkness My guiding voice inspires me, Shows me the right way, Makes sure I'm safe And then... It's time to bid good night!
Meek, timid and lonely soul I, Speck, take the sidewalk in the world of words Boisterous, Gigantic words push and shove me On the road less travelled I bump into a group of meaningless wanderers And turn Spectacular
Good.
ReplyDeleteIt is very difficult to explain what good haiku is. It is like a hickup that you get at the most unexpected moment. It is not intended or premeditated and you cannot hold it back either. That is where the Zen element comes in.
You don't struggle climbing. You just fall...
Keep falling. :-)
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