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Work Moves

Distant abode
Middle of the night
Girl zips past

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  1. Fighting the aloofness of the night, the silence and the darkness

    A Girl zips past!

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  2. :) that will be me... after we move into our new house

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  3. You are getting into the thing of it, packing dimension into your words.
    You know, when I read a haiku I see it as a short visual clipping, the leanest possible.
    Don't bother about the worth of what you write. Can we pack it in, can we pack the whole thing in, is our challenge. The only challenge.
    You will enjoy the ride. It will give another dimension to each day ahead.
    All the best.

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  4. By the way, I thought your title is rather unpoetic. Why not change it to 'working girl' or something more subtle?

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  5. U r right sir... it was too obvious... I guess my years in journalism have made me so unpoetic n straight... How's this one?

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  6. still not happy enough. but don't worry. don't get stuck; keep moving.:-)
    which newspaper are you working for? where? haiku will help you write good picture captions and headings.

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  7. I'm working with Times Of India, Chandigarh as a chief copy editor... It's the first time that I'm trying my hand at all this... I've never been very keen about poetry... Don't know from where is this thing coming and I'm not even sure that whatever I'm writing is poetry or not and if I'm going in the right direction... But it gives a vent to my thoughts... And your words matter a lot... thanku so much... I mean it

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  8. it comes and goes. it is a state of mind, very fickle, isn't it?

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