River meanders
Dodges boulders
Life moves on
Dodges boulders
Life moves on
On an unknown road, in a moonless night I start for home Not sure of reaching my destination As death haunts the place I shudder with fear of unknown But for the light of love I am engulfed in darkness My guiding voice inspires me, Shows me the right way, Makes sure I'm safe And then... It's time to bid good night!
Hm... loved this one.
ReplyDeleteMeandering river.... its so interesting, a river just keeps flowing to meet the sea and to loose its own identity..!
one of the qualities of good haiku is it ends with an 'aha' sensation...like a temple bell humming after the last ring. try for that effect.
ReplyDeleteThis is the guidance I have been looking for... I'm trying to do what u r saying... Looking forward for ur reaction on "Full Toss"
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