A cold silence
separates us
Frozen feelings
keep us together
Don’t try to thaw it
Forget warming up
Or malice will spill over
separates us
Frozen feelings
keep us together
Don’t try to thaw it
Forget warming up
Or malice will spill over
I was born a woman in a man’s world. But for him, I was not an ordinary woman… I was different. That day when I opened my eyes, his was the first, or perhaps the second, face – I don’t exactly remember – that flashed in front of my eyes. For him, it was love at first sight and the moment he held me in his arms, he gave away his heart to me. I was in such a trance-like state that I could not fathom what was happening around me. But as the time passed, his pure, holy love for me, melted my heart. Within no time, I became his sweetheart, his life. Even the love of his life, his beautiful wife, could not match the spell that I cast on him. Seeing the intensity of his love for me, she never dared to step into our privacy. As years went by, his love for me kept on changing forms. Sometimes he was my friend, at others he was my mentor, my idol. He helped me solve all my “problems”, but most of our time together was spent fighting over silly things. Not even a single peaceful day passed amo...
hmmm...lovers' tiff?
ReplyDeletenicely expressed, Charu. i wait for your next poem after the thawing.
hahaahaa.. no sir... it’s nothing do with me... wanted to write something which I have not experienced.. at least not in recent past... was trying my hand at expressing others' feelings and these others are fictitious
ReplyDeletethat changes the complexion of the whole thing. beautiful. but a tiff now and then is all right. should not last more than two hours, though.
ReplyDeletecold silence separating and frozen feelings binding is a nice image of contrasting quality of the same thing.
Trying to get what others feel is good may be. Never tried.
ReplyDeletewriting is cool as ever.
The design on your page is too bright. means its good but difficult to read. so can you change please.
Rohit's comment betrays a certain frigidity. You should have said : "you write beautifully, but isn't the page, the whole prospect, a little hard on the eyes? will you change please?" :)
ReplyDelete:) sure... I will
ReplyDeletehow do you bring on the smile symbol? :-) -- like this?
ReplyDelete:) yea .. hope u wud like this layout
ReplyDeleteyou can be more colourful. bring in a little more brightness, contrast and that subtle sense of aesthetics that only you young people know how to bring.
ReplyDelete@ Cgharu
ReplyDeleteThanks for changing the design.
@ Venugopal sir.
Sir, i am not good in expressing things. Sometimes it changes the real meaning i know but i am working hard on this.
Sometimes i miss the soul of the poem too, i know thats bad but what to do.
I am reading more and more to understand the art and gain.
Thats why i am not commenting regularly.
Thanks for taking a note on the comment.
Regards
Rohit
How marvelous, how marvelous. Loved this one absolutely.
ReplyDelete:) thanku so much Arun... Comments from all u ppl make me shed my inhibitions and keep on writing... :) thanku so much
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